Keep Your Eye on The Edge – another 6 Sentence Story!

Welcome to GirlieOnTheEdge. I don’t know what you call it after you’ve pulled a “hat trick” but I’m back for a 4th consecutive week with a Six Sentence Story.

You know, the blog hop that happens every Thursday, courtesy of one ivywalker of uncharted fame. Hey! What the hell happened? Look at my dashboard! (no, I know you can’t but that’s what I want to yell)

When I last left the dashboard this morning, all looked as it always has. When I returned this evening? Presto! Chango! My dashboard has been altered! No longer are there words in the far left column saying “Dashboard” or “Comments” or “Pages”. Now. Now, there are pictures. Little icons. Instead of words. Seems words and writing are giving way to icons and formulas.

Which is something I don’t have for these bloghops. Wish that I did. Let’s see what can be done with this week’s clue “tear”.

Wtf?!

She could feel the rending of the now stretched to capacity, diaphanous fabric that carefully covered the armour. Armour that served as protection and haven from all that was out there

She stood silently, stoically still as disbelief deftly and without mercy paralyzed her.

There on the hardwood floor, in the middle of the room she called home, the room with comfy oversized chairs, her favorite period piece couch snagged at a ticket only estate sale, lay her manuscript scattered like spent confetti on a ballroom floor at midnight on New Year’s Eve.

Turning away and with an abormal amount of self-control, she walked into the kitchen, returning moments later, a tear slowly descending each cheek, and bent down with dust pan and brush.

 

20 thoughts on “Keep Your Eye on The Edge – another 6 Sentence Story!

  1. ivywalker October 15, 2015 / 7:46 pm

    Oh no!!!! Tell more….damn six sentence rule…we need virgins in this hop!!!

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  2. luckyjc007 October 15, 2015 / 7:54 pm

    Very intriguing story…I’d love to hear more. I would like to know about the manuscript!

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  3. oldegg October 15, 2015 / 8:32 pm

    We definitely need one more sentence as “Wtf?!” doesn’t count in my book. You are a tease leading us on like that.

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    • GirlieOnTheEdge October 15, 2015 / 9:10 pm

      You know, I changed that first word at the last minute. Hm. I hope that isn’t a bad thing?! 😀

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  4. Kristi October 15, 2015 / 9:34 pm

    This begs an explanation! What happened to that manuscript?!

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    • GirlieOnTheEdge October 15, 2015 / 9:47 pm

      I don’t disagree. It most certainly does deserve an explanation! Problem is, I haven’t figured that out yet lol

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  5. pictimilitude October 15, 2015 / 9:51 pm

    Nice six sentence story there.:)
    Hope your week has been good. Sending hugs. 🙂

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    • GirlieOnTheEdge October 15, 2015 / 10:18 pm

      Thank you Cyndi!
      Not bad 🙂 Hope yours has been good as well. Return hugs! 😀

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  6. Pat B October 16, 2015 / 5:50 pm

    Very intriguing story! Tell us more.

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    • GirlieOnTheEdge October 16, 2015 / 8:21 pm

      Thanks Pat! I’m thinking it might make a good short story. Provided I know the rest of it lol

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  7. messymimi October 16, 2015 / 9:56 pm

    Well done! Her life is precise, as you describe it, so it makes me wonder even more how something so unexpected could happen to her.

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    • GirlieOnTheEdge October 20, 2015 / 9:11 pm

      Thank you and I apologize! I didn’t notice your comment got sent to my spam folder!

      Well, she was none too pleased and as you can see she was totally taken aback by what happened. Definitely unexpected 🙂

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  8. messymimi October 16, 2015 / 9:57 pm

    Well done! Her life seems so precise, as you describe it, so it makes me wonder even more how something so unexpected could happen to her.

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    • GirlieOnTheEdge October 17, 2015 / 11:06 am

      Thank you 🙂 I know, right?! Perhaps I will get to the bottom of that “mystery” 😀

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  9. valj2750 October 18, 2015 / 8:16 pm

    Now you have to come back next week and try for a Penta? trick?????? Anyway, loved the story and I want MORE.

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    • GirlieOnTheEdge October 18, 2015 / 9:18 pm

      Hm…Penta trick sounds legit to me 😀 Thanks Val. I’d like to keep going.
      Hey! You gave me a great idea. Now to see if I can work it….

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  10. Spira December 23, 2022 / 7:11 pm

    Wtf?!
    Thanks for handing me the keys of a sentence when in need of a quick rescue😆

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