Southwest Chief Train #4 left the Flagstaff depot at 8:38 PM, night’s blanket having completely covered the blazing skyline
Nearing 9:45 PM, like a lullaby sung to an overtired infant, the steady rhythmic sound of the train’s wheels turning on the tracks sent me into a soft slumber.
Dreams, deserting for the farther reaches of my mind, left nothing in their wake but the sighing of my unconscious as peace found its niche
There, against the scrub landscape of anything is possible, the map unfolded, a vein of gold on the ocean’s floor, it couldn’t have been farther from my reach
Yet energy and insistence shone a light on the adventure that lay before me, destiny on reserve
Southwest Chief Train #4, peopled with hope and expectation, sped through the night, destinations yet unknown
This is just so good. I love…”night’s blanket having completely covered the blazing skyline…” and
“…Dreams, deserting for the farther reaches of my mind, left nothing in their wake…” Killer stuff. Great six. One of your best.
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Thank you, Paul!
I’m glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate your feedback.
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Oh to board a train of unknown destination. My dream come true. Beautifully expressed six.
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Don’t you love trains?😀
Thank you!
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cool*
Fun Six
*compliment on the combination of (an) idea and visually-evocative words (plus, I liked the use of time to provide a forward motion to the story).
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Thank you, Clark. And…thank you!
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Having taken some long train rides, I could feel every piece of this SSS and could remember similar feelings. Very picturesque.
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Thank you, Pat. I am partial to riding trains. There’s a comfort in it, a non-suspension of time, if you will. That and I love listening to oncoming passenger trains for the same feeling it generates – a subliminal comfort.
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There’s just something about a train, isn’t there.
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Yes, yes there is 🙂
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Such really vivid imagery.. You should say its niche though
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Thank you, Larry.
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Climb aboard for some vivid imagery! I especially enjoyed the fourth stanza.
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Thank you, D. Avery! One of my favorites too 🙂
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