Not without. It’s a 6.

GirlieOnTheEdge

Fractured, a million minute pieces, a framework crumbled. Not without warning were the signs, no acknowledgement of foundation fissures visible to the naked eye. Source trace immaterial, time works what it will not without cooperation. Of the moment, in the moment, each moment opportunity. Reach outward without prejudice, probability jury will reject, stacked long ago. Your power only, change in the pocket, lay it on the table.

26 thoughts on “Not without. It’s a 6.”

  3. clark December 16, 2020 / 10:32 pm

    yeah, I’m with P-stone and Frank on that last line… damn where are the smoke-filled coffee houses when you need ’em…. maybe a little Brubeck and white-ringed, cigarette scared tables
    ‘cellent Six

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  4. UP December 16, 2020 / 10:57 pm

    “Of the moment in the moment…” grrrrrrrrrrreat line. Live the six.

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  5. Jael Stevens December 17, 2020 / 1:46 am

    Ohhhh, I must go with the others–a fine last line, and yes, some Brubeck “Take Five” 🙂

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  11. Liz H December 17, 2020 / 10:02 pm

    Gotta keep on, because there’s nothing else to be done.

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  12. Pat Brockett December 18, 2020 / 6:54 pm

    A deep and powerful message in this SSS!

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  13. The Vintage Toy Advertiser December 19, 2020 / 11:06 am

    A powerful and punching Six in its pace, structure and coloured text. I like the word repetition of ‘moment’. Can’t argue with that last line either, the knockout. Nice one, D 🙂
    PS. Can’t argue with Queensryche either 😎

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    • GirlieOnTheEdge December 19, 2020 / 10:48 pm

      Thank you, V. It was a rare soc moment. Last line. What it’s about, right?
      P.S. 😎

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