Shifting my weight in the ancient papasan chair, plump with bright tropical flower patterned cushions, I lay partially on my side, tanned legs comfortably curled, hard cover book open carefully so as not to bend its binding.
I’d been lounging on the back patio out of the sun’s reach, catching up on reading and relaxing, enjoying the smells of the ocean and the muffled pounding of the surf when a jolt of vertigo abruptly grabbed me, sending my stomach into a summersaulty flip-flop; I immediately sat upright, each hand simultaneously reaching down either side of my thighs to find a firm anchor in the chair’s cushions.
All aboard!…All aboard!!…Aw-ll a-board!!
What the…it was a train conductor’s voice all red velvet sweetness, the softly shouted syllables hanging in the air like crisp clean, cotton sheets pinned to a clothesline, billowing in the breeze of a mid-summer morning.
After the vertigo eased, I walked to the edge of the patio to search the area of the backyard where I’d heard or thought I’d heard a man’s voice; seeing nothing out of the ordinary, nothing hiding behind the yellow hibiscus or pink butterfly bushes, nothing lurking around the live oak, I concluded it was my imagination, convincing myself I must have been experiencing that weird state before you fall asleep – when you have one foot in sleep-land and the other just beginning to step off the curb to join it.
Impossible…the unmistakable sound of a train whistle faint in the distance, I lost equilibrium again; that’s when I saw him in the far left corner of the backyard – a train conductor dressed in a dark colored 3 piece suit, brass buttoned coat, vest, trousers perfectly pressed and creased, the bill of his pillbox cap embroidered in gleaming, gold thread, he held a pocket watch in his left hand; behind him, where a wooden fence ought to be, was a black wrought iron gate beyond which was an old style wooden train platform, a few empty wooden benches and an idling train…the conductor gently smiled at me, pointed to his gold pocket watch, then looked towards the waiting train.
Get on board. This is one train you don’t want to miss!
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You sure, Liz? I’m on the fence, my self, lol
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It’s the weekend…take a chance!
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Nice description of almost falling asleep: “when you have one foot in sleep-land and the other just beginning to step off the curb to join it.” I’m not sure if I would take that train ride without knowing more about it unless that book was not worth finishing.
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Thank you, Frank. Pretty cool in the right circumstances.
Ha! Saved by a good book? 🙂
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The train raises suspicion, the writing is superb.
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As it would to some of us. Caution, Will Robinson.
Thank you, Mimi.
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Oh I think I’m definately on that train. Great descriptions and a new word… somersaulty. Definitely enjoyed reading your six.
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Put this man in first class! Thank you, Greg. Yeah, I can go for your spelling – would be a little more respectable looking in the dictionary 😉
Glad to hear that. Thanks.
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I didn’t even notice the first part was different. Merriam Webster say somer or summer are both acceptable. I was referring to the “y” at the end! It made the word sound fun!
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Excellent product of a well-trained mind. (boom, tish)
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Thanks, Doug 😁
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Delightful imagery as always, Denise, and a wonderful contrast between the tranquility of a lazy summer’s day and the sudden super-creepy appearance of that beckonning conductor. Much as I like trains, I’d go back to the book!
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Thank you, Chris. You know, I’m not so certain I’d go back to the book! I might feel compelled to “find out what was on the other side of the street”, lol
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PS What was the ‘not available’ tune I missed?
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Maybe this vid will work.
It was The Fly’s “Got you (where I want you). You might remember it from the movie, Disturbing Behavior.
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Aha, yes! Got it.
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The nice thing about trains (among a host of attributes) is that you can always disembark and follow the trails back home…so…
And as my daemonia nymphe says to me: What is impossible?
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This is true. But will home be the same “home” when we return?
…answer provided by question asked.
(band ref? you sent me “tubing”, lol)
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Maybe it will…we won’t. Terrifying & beautiful at the same time.
(You are right, they are a favorite band!
Sorry for that lol)
Was using the term with the actual ancient Hellenic meaning, before christianity demonized the term daemon.
Reference:
https://spirasc.wordpress.com/2017/10/24/lady-of-the-woods-iv-%ce%b1%ce%bc%ce%b1%ce%b4%cf%81%cf%85%ce%b1%cf%83/
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Most likely. No, we will not, because we can not. And so it is.
No apologies required and once I googled term, saw “band” in results – well, I had that feeling 🙂
Thank you for link.
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Ooh, you took me quite logically, through a beautifully described garden into an intriguing and inviting different world, Denise. Waiting for the continuation…
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I am pleased, Jenne, I was able to guide you somewhere else…
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Wondering too if this could be the start of our time travel story? 🤔🤔
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I’ll admit when I finished the story, the thought had crossed my mind.
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Sounds like you stepped through a time portal or something there, Denise… or reclined through it! There’s definitely some chronal overlap taking place.
Those voices you hear just at the point of sleep, now that’s an odd phenomenon… I hear them often, it usually sounds like group chatter and I can’t make any words out, but every now and then a clear word (or a laugh!) will come through, very clear. Next time I experience it, I’ll try to listen for ‘all aboard’!
Good post.
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Something, Tom. For sure.
Voices? “Ray’s hearing voices” (or something like that, lol. scene in the feed store, Field of Dreams)
Now that sounds very cool. Especially hearing laughter. What an opportunity! Can’t say I’ve heard voices but the almost sleep state is a goldmine of opportunity if one is so inclined.
Thank you.
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Take the last train to … somewhere. I think I’d give it a miss!
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Lol May not be such a bad idea, Keith!
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All aboard the Hypnagogia Express.. now boarding.
One of my favorite places!*
It’s not so much a strange place as much as the ultimate mental exercise.
That brief time when you return with an artifact from the non-rational world of dreams. Like trying to pick up a day-old sandcastle in two hands on a windy summer day.
* in small doses, mind you
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*yes, can be cool…in small doses, lol
Yeah, your analogy is pretty accurate.
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Alice in trainland! I’m not one for leaving the comfort of an antique papasan chair (I had to look that word up… what a cool chair!), nor to leave the pages of a good book… but the adventurer inside of me would have me boarding that train in a “summmersaulty” jiffy! 😎
A cool and curious Six, D!
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Why not, lol I never owned one but a friend of mine did – très comfy.
…and no doubt heading straight away to first class 😎
Thanks, V!
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I used to have a 1960s revolving tub chair, orange striped fabric, was really comfy!
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Googled your chair. Yes! That does look like a mighty comfy chair! (an orange dreamsicle chair?😉)
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Cool! Now you made me look up ‘orange dreamsicle’ … Mm… yummm!
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