Once upon a time in the year 2012, Clark decided to have a contest at his blog, the Wakefield Doctrine. It was specific, if memory serves me correctly, in that contestants must use within the title of the story the words “a dead balloon is (really just) a dead balloon”. My story won the contest! This Six Sentence Story is (really just) a Six Sentence Story and picks up…
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“Has it been that many years?” The Woman, canines no longer at her side, stepped forward cautiously, carefully, “this was not how I left this place.” Surveying the bleak landscape, she unconsciously pulled her woolen sweater closed, slowly buttoning every button as icy fingers of a chill began reaching for her bones. “How is this devastation possible after all I accomplished so many years ago?” Feeling as if she was standing in the lobby of a deserted movie house, perpetual Saturday Matinee, film noir, she could feel the despair that consumed this place; her body began to whisper “remember”. Closing her eyes, she rotated her body a full 360 degrees, inhaling deeply…
So poignant Denise
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Thank you, Sadje.
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You’re most welcome
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🎈
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Well done
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I’m glad you enjoyed it, Paul. Thank you.
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a masterful love song from sir paul . wakefield ah knuckle ball~
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without question. tip toe all the way.
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follow the Son, the sun. the one
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hell no i m an avenger. a bull in a china shop. destroy man from the boy. a three a scorpio an ox see?
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Excellent question: “How is this devastation possible after all I accomplished so many years ago?” Well described sense of a once pleasing past that is now unattractive when looking back on it.
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Your comments always open a door I missed, Frank. Thank you!
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If wishes were horses, we’d all ride balloons!
Let’s all close our eyes, remember to dream & wish…big, deep, breath….and exhale!
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Eyes closed, Liz. On 3…
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And awayyyy we all go…!
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