“Hey L…, nah, just hangin’ out today, ya know…really? you going to…hold on for a minute, someone’s knocking on the door…I know, like that happens a lot… sure...later. ”
“Dammit“, staring at my aching right big toe with a look of embarrassed sympathy, I organized my books, pushed them halfway under the couch *knock, knock, knock*,
“keep your shirt on buddy, I’m coming!”
The man standing in my doorway could hardly be referred to as “buddy”, “distinguished gentleman”, he seemed prepared to wait as long as it took for me to speak. Looking past him to either side for someone to jump out shouting “surprise!” I turned back to the older gentleman and his rectangular gift box – “for me, I presume?”
The man nodded slightly as he extended the box, embossed note card, “To the BarTender of the Six Sentence Café and Bistro“; without a word, he turned and was under the red glow of the exit sign almost before I could ask – “wait a minute, who’s this from!”
Closing the door, puzzlement turning to curiosity, I set the box down on the coffee table and opened the note card, the cursive writing out of place in the day and age of keyboards and emojis, “Smile doll, it’s your day, enjoy it, Lou”; inside the folds of tissue paper lay a gorgeous green, silk scarf I swear was sprinkled with the tiniest of diamond glitter; its softness caressing the palms of my hands, I gently wound it through my hair – yeah, today was off to a good start.
I’ve got to admit…Lou outdid himself!
The Gatekeeper is in total agreement, BarTender: Your day, enjoy it!
Whaddya say now, we pump up the music, wait for the others and set the roof of the SSC&B on fire?
Huh? All we need is music, sweet music, there ‘ll be music everywhere !🎉🥂
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The man has taste.
I say hell, yeah! Race you to the roof!
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Nice description: knocking on the door, mystery man, mystery package and then one finds it was from Lou all the time.
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Thank you, Frank. A gift from Lou was the last thing she expected.
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Happy BD! Looks like it’s going to be a good one
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Thank you, Ollie! It was.
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Every day should start like that, not just birthdays. Perfect for dancing in the street!
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No argument from me on that, Liz. Grab your party shoes, let’s go!
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What this beautiful day needs next is breakfast. Grits and grillades, anyone? Or would you prefer cheese grits with shrimp?
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Ooh! Breakfast is an excellent idea. May I try both? Then I’ll let you know!
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If i serve both, it’s brunch!
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Lovely scene setting for this story.
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Thanks so much, Sadje.
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You’re most welcome Denise
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Well, YOU are a diamond!! Hope you had a lovely birthday! HaPpY BIrTHdAy!! 🎉 So now I’m curious: the green scarf: why green? Was this guy a secret admirer? I have all the questions: a sign of a good story because it leaves me wanting more and wanting to fill in the answers. So good! Sending you BIG HUGS!! 🤗
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You make me smile, Cynthia! I did, thank you!!
Green because a favorite color. Not all shades, just certain ones 😉
It was Lou from the Bottom of the Sea Strip Club and Lounge. You know – Ian Devereaux’s “friend” 😀 Lou was featured in an earlier Café Six of mine awhile back.
I’m very glad you enjoyed my story Six. Big hugs back, my friend. Big ones 🤗
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It isn’t every day a girl gets a silk scarf sprinkled with glittering diamond dust. Wear the hell out of that mother, I say!
See ya on the roof! I’ll be the one in the fishnet stockings 😎
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No, it is not, Nancy! 😄
See ya on the roof!
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Happy birthday D 🤩 Well done Lou for getting the day off to a perfect start 😎
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Thanks, V! Lou appears to be a man of many surprises. Perfect 😎
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Things can only get better, yea!
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That’s exactly right, Keith!
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Fabulous! birthday and dancing!
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It is, Chris! Can’t have one without the other!!
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Happiest of Birthdays!!
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Thank you, Lisa!!
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Happy birthday, Denise, scarf and all! 🙂
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Thank you, Tom!😃
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Lou da man
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No doubt about it.
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Hmmm silk scarf is indeed very seductive.
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They certainly can be, C.
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Happy Birthday, Denise! That silk scarf is a lovely present.
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Thank you, Nicole! I only wish I’d received it irl, 😉
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