I came to in a hotel room with the stench of a dead body stand in for smelling salts.
Three times the size of my walk-up in the “Heights”, sophistication and refinement written all over it, this was no rent by the hour room; I needed a cigarette and reached for the inside of my jacket only I wasn’t wearing my jacket, it lay neatly folded over the back of the loveseat facing a massive window high above the sidewalk with a view of the… the ocean? A little unsteady and a lot pissed off, I moved towards couch and cigarettes; as I passed the mahogany writing desk, it’s chair neatly pushed in, the hotel’s letterhead caught my eye: “Welcome to the Claridge, Where Everyone’s Treated like a Star“, Atlantic City, New Jersey – the Claridge was easy 20 miles from the Starfish Lounge.
I grabbed a cigarette ignoring the dead guy on the floor, knife deep in his chest, took a drag deeper than the Hudson River Canyon and re-ran the footage from last night at the Starfish. We both drank a lot, me whiskey, her, gin martinis; I remember it was around 2 a.m. because I’d looked at my watch figuring I better leave to make the drop to Jimmy’s; no sooner had I looked up she was leaning over me, softly whispering in my ear, cleavage teasing just as quietly, daring me to pull her closer – next thing I know we’re hailing a cab; after that it was lights out, bubba.
Now I’m standing in a high dollar room at the Claridge Hotel in Atlantic City with a case of amnesia, a dead body, a missing woman and a missing envelope of cash… I needed to improvise a plan and fast.
It’s too late for him, but this is why i chose not to live a life of crime. Hope he figures a way out.
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I am fairly convinced he will find his way out. But it won’t be easy.
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I am left curious.
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I’m glad, Romi 😀 I’m rather curious now myself!
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It looks like she was trouble. I like the comparison of the stench of the dead body with smelling salts. He was left alive for some reason.
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Oh yeah, big time! Indeed he was, Frank.
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Oh, the plot thickens beautifully, Denise. Love it!
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Thanks, Chris!
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excellent ending line.. gives that forward momentum and not only leaves us (the Readers) wanting more, but need it as we’ve become invested in the protagonist and kinda don’t want him to get messed. Well, too</em< messed up.
Good Six, yo
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damn! tried to get cool with the html and left off the closing
lol
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Thank you, Clark. I certainly hope there’s “wanting more” as I believe there will be, lol
Had zero intention of doing a “follow up” to “Veronica” but there it was! 🙂
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This could go places
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Yes, indeedy!
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Good one, D. What a wild, hazy and mysterious ride, shot through the lens of someone just coming to and gagging for a cigarette. Hate to be in his shoes, probably only marginally better off than the dead guy with the knife in his chest. Ouch. 😎
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Thanks, V. It’s a ride he won’t ever want to get on again, lol
This is a follow up to last’s week’s Six which I intended as a stand alone/done and done Six but then, well then…
Here’s the link for your convenience, sir 😎
https://girlieontheedge1.wordpress.com/2021/05/08/veronica-its-a-6/
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Yeah, thanks for the linkage, D 🙂 An excellent prelude (can see now why you made the second part!).
Duly read, good lady 😎
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Quite a few things to sort out and lots that could prove problematical. Nice one.
My Six!
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You said it, Keith. There’s a whole lot going to be a problem, lol
Thank you 🙂
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Wow! Stellar first line–I was totally hooked. And the ending keeps me bumping along behind on the tow line…
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Thank you, Liz! Hooked is a good thing 😀
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Love this, Denise, about as noir as it can get!
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Thank you, C.E.! I’m enjoying the genre for forcing me to write shorter, more concise sentences.
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Wow! You’re channeling some kinda good story lines.
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Thank you, Lisa. There appears to be more to this story that wants to be told 🙂
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